tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post3444369332499871501..comments2023-08-22T05:38:11.211-04:00Comments on Glass Staircase: CultusAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-86686836967147537472011-05-07T10:50:52.914-04:002011-05-07T10:50:52.914-04:00impressive - your poems are uninhibited, which is ...impressive - your poems are uninhibited, which is a unique style I have come to expect and enjoy from you, Anthony.Sheilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06541409754494611831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-8730175097904875162011-05-06T18:53:08.941-04:002011-05-06T18:53:08.941-04:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.siulahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16111603191633183262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-79059038295452507362011-05-04T19:10:41.222-04:002011-05-04T19:10:41.222-04:00I'm just blown away. Poignantly worded and per...I'm just blown away. Poignantly worded and perfectly arranged, your words grip both spiritually and physically. Bravo!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-54803535267888968812011-05-04T18:02:31.949-04:002011-05-04T18:02:31.949-04:00Beautiful...I think these are my favorite lines be...Beautiful...I think these are my favorite lines because of the image that came to mind.<br /><br />the suicide note <br />was illegible not <br />because of the ink <br />running miles behind <br />me my childish waysAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08917475421671859755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-65606061172340868872011-05-04T16:28:48.688-04:002011-05-04T16:28:48.688-04:00powerful imagery... I liked especially the part ab...powerful imagery... I liked especially the part about the brick tied to the foot of the suicide... Strong write.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-76479843121623902722011-05-04T12:16:00.763-04:002011-05-04T12:16:00.763-04:00Not just a clever arrangement, but a strong messag...Not just a clever arrangement, but a strong message as well. It would work either way.Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-46996219608279340202011-05-04T11:44:17.087-04:002011-05-04T11:44:17.087-04:00Anthony, the visual is fantastic with this piece.....Anthony, the visual is fantastic with this piece...your writing is coming to find its real voice I believe after reading the past couple of One Shots...the brides apathy veiled...and more..the emotion is felt full and not hidden which makes it a great write...nice work..bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-54201705448407769632011-05-04T09:54:08.728-04:002011-05-04T09:54:08.728-04:00The visual impact you have created with the image ...The visual impact you have created with the image and upside down cross shaped words.. it has only added to the intensity of the theme!<br /><br />very well written..<br />Hugs xoxOliviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11755748082674775369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-31077549956096788232011-05-04T09:34:03.921-04:002011-05-04T09:34:03.921-04:00The visual impact of your post, adds a wow factor ...The visual impact of your post, adds a wow factor to the finished product but should not detract from the power of the words themselves. I like reading pieces which come from completely new angles - they make me sit up and take note.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-36922455319270196602011-05-04T07:57:38.326-04:002011-05-04T07:57:38.326-04:00Hey, very nice indeed.Hey, very nice indeed.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-8956098492054163712011-05-04T05:10:29.339-04:002011-05-04T05:10:29.339-04:00The upside down cross, great shape, great meaningf...The upside down cross, great shape, great meaningful poem expressed articulately and intelligently. Way to go hun!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-59230771303926971862011-05-04T01:30:10.150-04:002011-05-04T01:30:10.150-04:00I can't thank any of you enough... the things ...I can't thank any of you enough... the things all of you wonderful poets say about my work still just wows me... it really means so much! I appreciate all the supportAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-28261631930765420672011-05-04T00:57:26.516-04:002011-05-04T00:57:26.516-04:00your words are always expressed powerfully and pas...your words are always expressed powerfully and passionately. thankful you are free from constraint in your expressions.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01547380098561803645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-86280567255622056742011-05-04T00:13:22.340-04:002011-05-04T00:13:22.340-04:00So awesome! Stop in & read Breaking AwaySo awesome! Stop in & read <a href="http://upinthecosmos.blogspot.com/2011/05/breaking-away.html" rel="nofollow">Breaking Away</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17792036091186754290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-89165042258532733252011-05-04T00:09:23.009-04:002011-05-04T00:09:23.009-04:00Beautiful imagery and flow.. thought provoking, an...Beautiful imagery and flow.. thought provoking, and the verse shaped like a cross was well done!<br /><br /><a href="http://wp.me/p11nRA-YC" rel="nofollow">My One Shot Poem</a>Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-70719413784895902782011-05-03T21:27:26.541-04:002011-05-03T21:27:26.541-04:00The imagery and diction evoke a series of emotions...The imagery and diction evoke a series of emotions, all raw. Nice write.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-33601207671728431472011-05-03T20:54:28.881-04:002011-05-03T20:54:28.881-04:00There are so many vivid images in this. You've...There are so many vivid images in this. You've used the shape, almost like a negative image of the cross above, so well. It reinforced your words perfectly.<br /><br />And once again, I'm struck by the picture at the top. You always give us such wonderful images.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-8421227301782091702011-05-03T20:14:28.688-04:002011-05-03T20:14:28.688-04:00I honestly am tongue tied.I honestly am tongue tied.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-56551926428211314192011-05-03T19:57:42.799-04:002011-05-03T19:57:42.799-04:00This is excellent and well done :)This is excellent and well done :)ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-15690396823823722122011-05-03T19:28:14.080-04:002011-05-03T19:28:14.080-04:00your look at death, betrayal and the cross each a ...your look at death, betrayal and the cross each a volume for each - yet you pull them together in a whisper, a plea, in apathy<br /><br />well done Anthony<br /><br />:) Moonie and thanks for everythingAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13414513238308254080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-64320239230510722552011-05-03T18:06:41.204-04:002011-05-03T18:06:41.204-04:00This is excellent in so many ways... I just love w...This is excellent in so many ways... I just love what is written in the shadow of the crossAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-35507997931551648802011-05-03T17:47:19.381-04:002011-05-03T17:47:19.381-04:00the bride's apathy and the veil laced with com...the bride's apathy and the veil laced with compensation is a strong image anthony..tight writeClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-17408044562020540802011-05-03T17:18:31.260-04:002011-05-03T17:18:31.260-04:00Thanks everyone... much appreciated.Thanks everyone... much appreciated.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-28128233789382075272011-05-03T17:18:01.855-04:002011-05-03T17:18:01.855-04:00The architecture is an immediate compelling aspect...The architecture is an immediate compelling aspect to this piece. A feeling of at odds pulled the energy forward as I read. A very capturing write! ~ RoseAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09988016086874324471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-13251813618805202522011-05-03T17:15:24.864-04:002011-05-03T17:15:24.864-04:00"emancipation I hid like a bride's apathy..."emancipation I hid like a bride's apathy in a veil laced with compensation the lord of darkness was Jesus to me" the driving refutation expressed in the lines and the visual presentation... damn artful and bold.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.com