tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post418378807147543672..comments2023-08-22T05:38:11.211-04:00Comments on Glass Staircase: ChambersAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-48977564409345225742012-12-27T01:32:33.925-05:002012-12-27T01:32:33.925-05:00Your blog was tweeted by a friend yesterday evenin...Your blog was tweeted by a friend yesterday evening. Thought I’d take a look. Best decision ever.I will keep your new article. cheap jerseyhttp://www.wholesalingjerseys.orgnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-48065872928161795892012-05-02T21:12:05.602-04:002012-05-02T21:12:05.602-04:00Whew! Powerful stuff here. "backs that carry ...Whew! Powerful stuff here. "backs that carry lashes" "half a hear" "disfigured" - so much pain here, anger. Raw.Chrishttp://chrisgalvinwriter.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-34247196379525963442012-05-02T15:13:19.027-04:002012-05-02T15:13:19.027-04:00Loving the reference to painkillers as something &...Loving the reference to painkillers as something 'regal', ruling mankind.....maybe something about drugs being god ....especially with the cross reference n your form (which I loved) ...intense....strong....lovedAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-72868207834532301302012-05-01T20:34:27.807-04:002012-05-01T20:34:27.807-04:00Like a chemical burn, soon I'll have to bring ...Like a chemical burn, soon I'll have to bring a first aid kit along for reads :).Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-2916021533502175492012-05-01T19:40:50.434-04:002012-05-01T19:40:50.434-04:00All we're missing is a crown of thorns, my poe...All we're missing is a crown of thorns, my poet messiah! Anthony...your words always just vibrate with the energy of your pen...seriously, how old is your soul! So much wisdom coupled with fearless writing equals a win every freaking time...Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-18786429129155812002012-05-01T19:26:55.131-04:002012-05-01T19:26:55.131-04:00Many wonderful ringing sounds from this poem:
Ove...Many wonderful ringing sounds from this poem:<br /><br />Over gardens and on <br />The backs that carry lashes<br /><br />It speaks to me of the struggle between the beauty of the moment and a painful history.poemblazehttp://poemblaze.wordpress.com/2012/05/01/jongleur/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-29353839125051342012012-05-01T18:44:09.608-04:002012-05-01T18:44:09.608-04:00I like those two lines outside the form of your wo...I like those two lines outside the form of your words ~ Intense writing ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-30705810650871422602012-05-01T18:20:52.190-04:002012-05-01T18:20:52.190-04:00Pretty cool the way your poem looks like a cross. ...Pretty cool the way your poem looks like a cross. A great idea given the poems content. Very creative, Anthony.emmett wheatfallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07466994239329611740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-780386253432003902012-05-01T17:38:11.759-04:002012-05-01T17:38:11.759-04:00Not this loyal chamber of shit - OH NO! - buried ...Not this loyal chamber of shit - OH NO! - buried treasure...<br /> and those pain killers man - purple pills makes me ills...<br /><br />sick! <br /> :DArron Shillinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17989854352644796752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-17616825868730235202012-05-01T17:27:50.593-04:002012-05-01T17:27:50.593-04:00The power in your words always grips me tight when...The power in your words always grips me tight when I read here. <br /><br />"Royal servants evolve mankind <br />From enamel dust to golden ashes <br />Over gardens and on <br />The backs that carry lashes<br />Face to face <br />Soul, too <br />So full,"<br /><br />Wow.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01547380098561803645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-23192975112707214802012-05-01T16:53:03.672-04:002012-05-01T16:53:03.672-04:00Marvelous and fine words. I must say, you took me ...Marvelous and fine words. I must say, you took me very deep. <br /><br />Thanks for sharing<br /><br />S.Shadiatiquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14081852070984670290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-79715069725153353162012-05-01T16:45:06.635-04:002012-05-01T16:45:06.635-04:00Quite deep and I loved it...fluently writtenQuite deep and I loved it...fluently writtenLilGypsyLaLahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17652391153661300117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-83972328958604303912012-05-01T16:44:52.308-04:002012-05-01T16:44:52.308-04:00'backs that carry lashes' is powerful.
th...'backs that carry lashes' is powerful.<br /><br />the last four lines rocked me.Mark Windhamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01662876682127886074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-23792458227119830492012-05-01T16:29:22.223-04:002012-05-01T16:29:22.223-04:00I really like the opening lines...Painkillers King...I really like the opening lines...Painkillers King's oath...we all have had our chamber of shit...I bow to your talent.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-84168712352555343512012-05-01T16:09:23.550-04:002012-05-01T16:09:23.550-04:00Intense, cool, I like it.Intense, cool, I like it.Frank Watsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11512960953837979822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-91198877242487627042012-05-01T16:01:23.680-04:002012-05-01T16:01:23.680-04:00Oo intense, yes chamber of shit, been there, and w...Oo intense, yes chamber of shit, been there, and we should produce rocking fucking tshirts you and I. Why aren't you published boy, get your arse in gear before I set Colin firth on you!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-27065786901973611192012-05-01T15:56:31.062-04:002012-05-01T15:56:31.062-04:00"Heir to the throne
Disfigured
Compared to ..."Heir to the throne <br />Disfigured <br />Compared to <br />Ancient busts <br />Of the messiahs <br />Of the temple <br />Let peace be <br />With the maker<br />Devour the blood <br />Of the killer"<br /><br />A strong, imaginative write. Great job.Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-32431874969861435952012-05-01T15:47:37.518-04:002012-05-01T15:47:37.518-04:00those last four lines tore right through my heart....those last four lines tore right through my heart...mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-90051439219944737202012-05-01T15:42:25.203-04:002012-05-01T15:42:25.203-04:00A psychological deconstruction of the ethic of res...A psychological deconstruction of the ethic of responsibility and loyalty and its intrinsic conflict with freedom. Both must balance to achieve a destiny and the missing ingredient is harmony. Well written my friend!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-39285824273103976752012-05-01T15:18:08.374-04:002012-05-01T15:18:08.374-04:00wishing for half a heart
Not this loyal chamber o...wishing for half a heart <br />Not this loyal chamber of shit ...sums it up for me...tight images as always anthonyClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-31799735635741094412012-05-01T15:15:18.198-04:002012-05-01T15:15:18.198-04:00I wish for half a heart
Not this loyal chamber of ...I wish for half a heart<br />Not this loyal chamber of shit<br /><br />Intriguing write.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-46446566398185859812012-05-01T15:14:04.265-04:002012-05-01T15:14:04.265-04:00Bringing some rhyme to the dance tonight, I see. I...Bringing some rhyme to the dance tonight, I see. I felt a beat here, as well as a beating. I can't say you're getting angrier out here, but you're definitely bringing serious verbal firepower. Peace, young friend. ~ jJoseph Heschhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13217169295029029233noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-29252432185256751992012-05-01T15:11:45.294-04:002012-05-01T15:11:45.294-04:00"Face to face
Soul, too
So full"
That..."Face to face <br />Soul, too <br />So full"<br /><br />That is wicked cool.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-60273719520576726852012-05-01T14:44:05.787-04:002012-05-01T14:44:05.787-04:00I wish for half a heart
Not this loyal chamber of...I wish for half a heart <br />Not this loyal chamber of shit <br /><br />ouch...<br /><br />thumping man, got the beat, and nice concrete form as well...also like...<br /><br />Forgetting love <br />Becoming free<br />An intercession into divinityBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com