tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post5338129598526989162..comments2023-08-22T05:38:11.211-04:00Comments on Glass Staircase: FireAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-24835862143667383062011-05-05T17:33:19.076-04:002011-05-05T17:33:19.076-04:00Solid, effective verses.Solid, effective verses.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-74139886918607827082011-05-02T17:53:46.461-04:002011-05-02T17:53:46.461-04:00I like the idea of a figment of golden rivers. I j...I like the idea of a figment of golden rivers. I just like rivers too. :)L.L. Barkathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13333960142447144678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-44933977789924744922011-05-01T22:57:59.227-04:002011-05-01T22:57:59.227-04:00hi, Anthony
it's been awhile thank you for you...hi, Anthony<br />it's been awhile thank you for your visit and comment<br /><br />I agree that these four lines finish it beautifully<br /><br />Walking with the potency and nerve<br />To become a verb<br />A figment in desert sand <br />Of golden rivers in which he swam<br /><br />love it all!<br />thank youHopehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07423174840229628807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-9163620218482014872011-05-01T19:17:15.588-04:002011-05-01T19:17:15.588-04:00Excellent word choice throughout. A character, a m...Excellent word choice throughout. A character, a metaphor and always a verb. Active. Good work, Anthony.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-58866939852310310802011-05-01T18:06:24.248-04:002011-05-01T18:06:24.248-04:00become a verb...very nice anthony...i agree you en...become a verb...very nice anthony...i agree you end this very nicely and in few words capture much...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-8836749569773373322011-05-01T17:23:49.315-04:002011-05-01T17:23:49.315-04:00wow, thank you so much Adam.. I appreciate that.wow, thank you so much Adam.. I appreciate that.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-74741342990364527472011-05-01T17:12:38.722-04:002011-05-01T17:12:38.722-04:00Your last four lines finish with a flourishing mel...Your last four lines finish with a flourishing melody; preceded by strong innuendo and details the reader can easily see reflected in those magical eyes... It seems to me, A, that each time I read your work, I can't peg a definitive style. Mad respect for that.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.com