tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post7558362175962760876..comments2023-08-22T05:38:11.211-04:00Comments on Glass Staircase: Creation of SkeletonAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-57863356891977888602011-03-23T13:39:57.606-04:002011-03-23T13:39:57.606-04:00Hi Anthony...
They walked the earth.. a very nice...Hi Anthony...<br /><br />They walked the earth.. a very nice rhythm to it all you created and ending was perfect so I could not help saying it....<br />they walked the earth...<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/03/whispers-seed-and-senseless-living.html<br />At Twitter @VerseEveryDayShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-91054546451587791592011-03-23T13:11:51.618-04:002011-03-23T13:11:51.618-04:00Wow! This is a remarkable piece. I love everything...Wow! This is a remarkable piece. I love everything about it: structure, statements, poignancy... somehow you have summed up the human race.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-4155256513474260552011-03-23T12:36:41.471-04:002011-03-23T12:36:41.471-04:00What a great form! Looks fittingly skeltal!
Grea...What a great form! Looks fittingly skeltal!<br /><br />Great One Shot, Anthony!Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-71814476798890002862011-03-22T21:17:11.638-04:002011-03-22T21:17:11.638-04:00intriguing piece...
...rob kistner
Image & Ve...intriguing piece...<br /><br />...rob kistner<br /><a href="http://image-verse.com" rel="nofollow">Image & Verse</a>robkistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08166835029205143266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-77754751944495426842011-03-22T17:47:14.924-04:002011-03-22T17:47:14.924-04:00tight anthony, you picked some intriguing pairings...tight anthony, you picked some intriguing pairings along the way..and i too like the way you structured this one...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-55850281791115406072011-03-22T17:23:15.806-04:002011-03-22T17:23:15.806-04:00Really like the internal rhyme in the first stroph...Really like the internal rhyme in the first strophe. You should play with that and see if you could carry it throughoutSteven Marty Granthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12025403178005766557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-57361742575051655502011-03-22T17:19:10.531-04:002011-03-22T17:19:10.531-04:00Very original thinking here Anthony loved the line...Very original thinking here Anthony loved the lines <br /><br />The killer the boy the saviour <br />they changed <br />The man the woman the child <br />they loved<br /><br />and the fact that it looks like a ribcageAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-10524220395969595812011-03-22T17:15:55.418-04:002011-03-22T17:15:55.418-04:00thanks Asobime!thanks Asobime!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-50848194600388734682011-03-22T17:15:32.157-04:002011-03-22T17:15:32.157-04:00Thanks Claudia & Dulce! :)Thanks Claudia & Dulce! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-55136470935330550012011-03-22T17:15:25.811-04:002011-03-22T17:15:25.811-04:00Very, very nice. Full bodied poem....with a haunt...Very, very nice. Full bodied poem....with a haunting quality.<br /><br />Lady NyoAsobimehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15661326504398833746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-39932795936889844742011-03-22T17:09:24.149-04:002011-03-22T17:09:24.149-04:00Great work, Anthony
Love the nouns now and again i...Great work, Anthony<br />Love the nouns now and again into one action, direction,... that of life- as long as they live... even the dead survive. YesDulçe ♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/14958592985938279356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-56186372219963373092011-03-22T16:59:42.041-04:002011-03-22T16:59:42.041-04:00love the structure of this poem - great rhythm and...love the structure of this poem - great rhythm and looks like a skeleton - great idea anthonyClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-88613598757842081232011-03-22T16:41:58.377-04:002011-03-22T16:41:58.377-04:00Thank you very much bkm!Thank you very much bkm!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-85042629489824173622011-03-22T16:32:11.356-04:002011-03-22T16:32:11.356-04:00Oh Nice Anthony, I love contrast and you melded ma...Oh Nice Anthony, I love contrast and you melded many so nicely here in various aspects of our humanity...one is nothing without the other - how can we separate even angels from demons if one or other did not know existence - the merging of villan and victim..that is my favorite line and a powerful image.......bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.com