tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post7734224133591325317..comments2023-08-22T05:38:11.211-04:00Comments on Glass Staircase: SiouxAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-44631925627543154952011-10-21T18:05:13.647-04:002011-10-21T18:05:13.647-04:00I see it as a harsh, admonishing social commentary...I see it as a harsh, admonishing social commentary with poetic license liberally employed.<br /><br />I've read it several times without making much more of it, but if it is what you intended, it is enough.<br /><br />Cheers!Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12823532229269308280noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-60784824255067785392011-10-20T11:40:55.531-04:002011-10-20T11:40:55.531-04:00Loved this poem ... very sensual :)Loved this poem ... very sensual :)bajanpoethttp://poetwhispers.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-19512326261866429872011-10-20T11:26:41.961-04:002011-10-20T11:26:41.961-04:00hot, powerful attitude.
well done piece.hot, powerful attitude.<br /><br />well done piece.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-61542552915770740472011-10-19T16:19:18.799-04:002011-10-19T16:19:18.799-04:00Very sensual and hot words. Love it.
MelanieVery sensual and hot words. Love it.<br /><br />MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-74513131133389904122011-10-19T09:14:43.323-04:002011-10-19T09:14:43.323-04:00very sensual write ....thanks for sharing xvery sensual write ....thanks for sharing xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10624767707167052328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-24876805008458971702011-10-19T00:16:36.061-04:002011-10-19T00:16:36.061-04:00such an excellent write all your lines are brillia...such an excellent write all your lines are brilliant and it is hard to choose one that stands out more than the rest so well done<br />http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/18/farewell-my-three-legged-friend/Ann LeFlorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09421100825301270608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-38062324260628542282011-10-19T00:02:17.677-04:002011-10-19T00:02:17.677-04:00Brilliant piece my friend. Love the depth hidden ...Brilliant piece my friend. Love the depth hidden within the images, weaving darkness into the blanket of sensuality.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-48696720779551601292011-10-18T20:13:35.412-04:002011-10-18T20:13:35.412-04:00Aspects of brillance litter this poem. Not as tras...Aspects of brillance litter this poem. Not as trash, but momentary insights into a great poets mind. You are getting better, more refined, diverse, and original Anthony.emmett wheatfallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07466994239329611740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-89251769127906435652011-10-18T18:40:14.323-04:002011-10-18T18:40:14.323-04:00Well hello! This was a steamy one Anthony mixed w...Well hello! This was a steamy one Anthony mixed with a little regret perhaps?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-22789465104767162542011-10-18T18:31:36.541-04:002011-10-18T18:31:36.541-04:00Perhaps, I read it wrong, but I thought it was kin...Perhaps, I read it wrong, but I thought it was kind of sad, like one wanting what wasn't good. Either way, you know how to rock a poem, Anthony. Excellent as always :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01547380098561803645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-86257917341963444412011-10-18T17:14:18.372-04:002011-10-18T17:14:18.372-04:00Lots of interesting images you paint, especially
&...Lots of interesting images you paint, especially<br />"I laid with you as an eloquent nude." <br /><br />"I still breathe fullness as pure" This line strikes me as well.Joanne Young Elliotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14431836725661024756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-26868955747237934382011-10-18T16:39:16.350-04:002011-10-18T16:39:16.350-04:00Powerful images here, excellent read, thanksPowerful images here, excellent read, thanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-77611888498563231052011-10-18T16:36:42.179-04:002011-10-18T16:36:42.179-04:00Darkly sensuous & very intense. "Gagged a...Darkly sensuous & very intense. "Gagged and bound I have your disease" ~ Maybe not a bad thing...Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18216734722467789412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-1022663401891050442011-10-18T15:52:41.151-04:002011-10-18T15:52:41.151-04:00oh goodness anthony...this is dripping with raw se...oh goodness anthony...this is dripping with raw sensuality...sent shivers down my spine...pure pleasure...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-77514261864554730512011-10-18T15:51:51.001-04:002011-10-18T15:51:51.001-04:00Very sensual, what an affliction! some lovely writ...Very sensual, what an affliction! some lovely writing here..very much enjoyed this poem, especially:<br />'Counting thy blessings as<br />One torn rib of man <br />Creating a cannibal's cave in the sheets'Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-67602200226760661822011-10-18T15:43:45.191-04:002011-10-18T15:43:45.191-04:00That disease tells me as if aids... but at the sam...That disease tells me as if aids... but at the same time, a contagious beautiful love thing... don't know...Dulçe ♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/14958592985938279356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-86284345309476516972011-10-18T15:32:21.122-04:002011-10-18T15:32:21.122-04:00I know you are using sensual imagery; however, I r...I know you are using sensual imagery; however, I read this as political and perhaps religious protest. Am I wrong? The disease is pulling us all into darkness (and probably not filled with delicious lemon curd). Thought provoking, for sure. Well done, Anthony!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-70211771999475135742011-10-18T15:30:26.167-04:002011-10-18T15:30:26.167-04:00This is so rich with imagery. Wow!This is so rich with imagery. Wow!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-59163483765857584042011-10-18T15:28:31.935-04:002011-10-18T15:28:31.935-04:00Gorgeously rendered and full of ideas, thank you f...Gorgeously rendered and full of ideas, thank you for giving us such incredible work each week.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-63197325084899771742011-10-18T15:12:21.749-04:002011-10-18T15:12:21.749-04:00Intense and beautiful. Your lines cascade with as...Intense and beautiful. Your lines cascade with assurance one to the other delivering a riveting portrait of lovers loving and the painful ache there....xxxjJenne' R. Andrews https://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-37597407307490550342011-10-18T15:09:35.578-04:002011-10-18T15:09:35.578-04:00My favorite? I laid with you as an eloquent nude. ...My favorite? I laid with you as an eloquent nude. Thanks for posting and sharing.theborgpoethttp://theborgpoet.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-18453512028150380742011-10-18T15:06:36.897-04:002011-10-18T15:06:36.897-04:00whew. so many great lines to love, I can't pic...whew. so many great lines to love, I can't pick a favorite, but really love the whole piece.mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-1012151740342192032011-10-18T14:24:08.562-04:002011-10-18T14:24:08.562-04:00Another excellent piece. This line really resonate...Another excellent piece. This line really resonated with me, gave me shivers: "I am a cross at the scene of a tragedy / Overshadowed by tall blades of grass". Thanks for the thought-provoking write.Uneven Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14081631496158407509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-69326907495750875742011-10-17T22:22:57.785-04:002011-10-17T22:22:57.785-04:00this is one disease worth having...sensual write m...this is one disease worth having...sensual write my friend :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-21259831469988218942011-10-17T22:04:00.338-04:002011-10-17T22:04:00.338-04:00One torn rib of man
Creating a cannibal's cav...One torn rib of man <br />Creating a cannibal's cave in the sheets <br />While two tongues wilt like dying roses <br /><br />and <br /><br />i ama cross at the scene of a tragedy<br /><br />great lines anthony and hot verse...nice an sensual...might not be a bad disease...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com