tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post8229139537178984261..comments2023-08-22T05:38:11.211-04:00Comments on Glass Staircase: SlaughterAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-36711813063218847812011-11-23T22:01:43.704-05:002011-11-23T22:01:43.704-05:00Tasty scribe.... visual in its imageryTasty scribe.... visual in its imageryAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17957913294364310380noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-79321420952024092072011-11-23T19:59:50.640-05:002011-11-23T19:59:50.640-05:00Very powerful writing. The imagery stunning and vi...Very powerful writing. The imagery stunning and vibrant. A complete mind blow and a poetic work of extraordinary abstract art. Your growth is visible.emmett wheatfallhttp://emmettwheatfall.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-90084818331362723732011-11-23T14:22:01.009-05:002011-11-23T14:22:01.009-05:00sensual, evocative and strong, Take care which dir...sensual, evocative and strong, Take care which direction you blow those words brother.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-11504535606319281742011-11-23T10:48:57.734-05:002011-11-23T10:48:57.734-05:00A whirlwind of apposite imagery and biting comment...A whirlwind of apposite imagery and biting commentary; an excellent poem, you never fail to impress.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-891323272858820172011-11-23T10:46:48.594-05:002011-11-23T10:46:48.594-05:00Oh striking stuff! Brilliant write, so damn power...Oh striking stuff! Brilliant write, so damn powerful!<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-61408426959701776252011-11-23T02:01:23.713-05:002011-11-23T02:01:23.713-05:00Its great run with thoughts behind the image and t...Its great run with thoughts behind the image and then the ending came as a thunder strike... Liked it a lot... Thanks for sharing..<br /><br />Shashi<br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/11/whispers-sighs.html<br />At Twitter @VerseEveryDayShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-52337041233581329172011-11-23T01:30:41.991-05:002011-11-23T01:30:41.991-05:00Your work is so friggin POWERFUL! Gah, you're ...Your work is so friggin POWERFUL! Gah, you're awesome. I have nothing intelligent to say, my apologies. Just, gah!Mirandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16063109274631761935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-58419014397312447542011-11-23T01:21:35.664-05:002011-11-23T01:21:35.664-05:00intense imagery!intense imagery!junebjimenezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17598941664469132624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-16602649505784320662011-11-22T21:58:38.402-05:002011-11-22T21:58:38.402-05:00Very interesting work here. The images and words c...Very interesting work here. The images and words capture what a real sacrifice must mean. I am caught wondering, though, whether this is supplication or vengeance, or is that intended? one thing threw me, the "no man's land is thy island." A bit close to no man is an island. The faint echo of that allusion distracted me away from the power of the poem, for a moment at least.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-74230762241600739622011-11-22T21:48:56.278-05:002011-11-22T21:48:56.278-05:00Mighty intense! i am just spellbound at how the wh...Mighty intense! i am just spellbound at how the whole thing just comes together, despite so many different images or is it just one?Another Man's Dreamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04453440630317550594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-90666394861015644282011-11-22T20:28:37.736-05:002011-11-22T20:28:37.736-05:00Good work, ADS. At 19, you already have a very fi...Good work, ADS. At 19, you already have a very firm grip on your poetics. Keep it up. I tracked you here via Railroad Poetry Project (where I, too, am featured). Come and visit me at http://www.airpoetry.com and try your hand at Air Poetry. It's based on overheard conversations (both in person and online). I think you might enjoy it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-22615191813401500602011-11-22T19:54:40.476-05:002011-11-22T19:54:40.476-05:00Kinda made me glad I'm a vegetarian...tehe.
S...Kinda made me glad I'm a vegetarian...tehe.<br /><br />Seriously, lovely vibrancy from the first word to the last. I especially loved:<br /><br />"who begs to speak our language but instead left to self"<br /><br />Amazing, strong poem : )<br />-EvaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-10972737063925682202011-11-22T19:38:43.674-05:002011-11-22T19:38:43.674-05:00Great images here...by the next soul who speaks gi...Great images here...by the next soul who speaks gibberish like the born deaf <br />who begs to speak our language but instead left to self<br />no man's land is thy island....great lines!ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-88307805146110634992011-11-22T17:53:09.085-05:002011-11-22T17:53:09.085-05:00whoa! this is a powerful incantation.
I've re...whoa! this is a powerful incantation.<br />I've read it thrice, and there's more here than I understand in that amount of reading.<br /><br />it's good. the words zing. the images fling.<br />and I'm just glad I turned vegetarian.<br /><br />great piece here!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-25147594205345378312011-11-22T17:24:39.419-05:002011-11-22T17:24:39.419-05:00"I've come to realize fucked up flesh
is..."I've come to realize fucked up flesh <br />is a blessing in disguise" That's pretty accurate, I'd say. <br /><br />Wonderful writings, Anthony.nancy mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09141594807499701205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-70475648092509026692011-11-22T17:20:59.241-05:002011-11-22T17:20:59.241-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.nancy mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09141594807499701205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-62768104872924778562011-11-22T17:14:47.265-05:002011-11-22T17:14:47.265-05:00Amazing write. love the tone, the imagery. Brutal...Amazing write. love the tone, the imagery. Brutal, yet fascinating just the same. Love the symbolic/metaphorical substance to this piece. ThanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-82625174443669277602011-11-22T16:46:20.586-05:002011-11-22T16:46:20.586-05:00Strong visuals. Like Beachanny I'm thinking Tu...Strong visuals. Like Beachanny I'm thinking Turkey Day. Well done, like Thursday's dinner!Mark Butkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04028422696260495656noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-74441619685414704762011-11-22T16:21:29.836-05:002011-11-22T16:21:29.836-05:00All the ingredients blend into a mighty fine suppe...All the ingredients blend into a mighty fine supper - - V intense indigestion is the best kind - a tasty brew AnthonyArron Shillinghttp://tomeliot.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-86205489634552712752011-11-22T16:06:26.443-05:002011-11-22T16:06:26.443-05:00absoluely phenomenal, Anthony. breast, overfed st...absoluely phenomenal, Anthony. breast, overfed stomach, spine (-less, might I add ;), dicks too small to pleasure - love that one and the ending sums it up perfectly.Sheilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06541409754494611831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-11387673047781814162011-11-22T15:59:12.341-05:002011-11-22T15:59:12.341-05:00My mind bounced all over the place as I read this,...My mind bounced all over the place as I read this, from Thanksgiving dinner, to the midwife helping another demon to jump into this world and onto another's back.<br /><br />And WHO could ever not read this after "traveling on all fours with bloodied knees"? Good poem. I'd say, even maybe...d'verse? --grin!steveronihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04010875412308487592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-34647583238313908552011-11-22T15:44:14.262-05:002011-11-22T15:44:14.262-05:00Anthony, the images and narrative get more intense...Anthony, the images and narrative get more intense all the time. And that's a great thing.Joseph Heschhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13217169295029029233noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-77597070385765689452011-11-22T15:40:31.478-05:002011-11-22T15:40:31.478-05:00ok...i'm guilty...i'm a big lover of foie ...ok...i'm guilty...i'm a big lover of foie gras...ha..that sidetracked me a bit..powerful words here anthony and breath-taking imagery..just as we're used from you..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-17469605639909527662011-11-22T15:33:30.767-05:002011-11-22T15:33:30.767-05:00Striking imagery. I felt like I was watching a voo...Striking imagery. I felt like I was watching a voodoo ritual or some other sacrificial event.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2011/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-36988323964367205212011-11-22T15:30:37.579-05:002011-11-22T15:30:37.579-05:00Bloodied knees indeed bro, you were straight with ...Bloodied knees indeed bro, you were straight with your words on this one, no hold back, what a pieceKodjo Deynoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01299996598769756878noreply@blogger.com