tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post8252166876430015056..comments2023-08-22T05:38:11.211-04:00Comments on Glass Staircase: HyphemaAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-13213500058163822262013-11-21T19:45:32.629-05:002013-11-21T19:45:32.629-05:00I love the question in this, what do we say to our...I love the question in this, what do we say to ourselves? Sometimes it is simply stubbornness that gets us through. <br />At any angle. :) mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-67429239838272811632013-11-20T14:58:56.139-05:002013-11-20T14:58:56.139-05:00That last question is almost totally gender-specif...That last question is almost totally gender-specific; the girls don't get the questionable benefit of that angle on things!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-89397296889491606052013-11-20T14:48:18.478-05:002013-11-20T14:48:18.478-05:00As someone who 'takes the piss' (is that a...As someone who 'takes the piss' (is that an international saying or just Oz? Don't know.) I can relate. As someone wracked with doubts, the coat fits very well.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-13031384980875020342013-11-20T02:12:46.236-05:002013-11-20T02:12:46.236-05:00strong pen ~strong pen ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-6485054517691173662013-11-20T02:10:41.317-05:002013-11-20T02:10:41.317-05:00I drank in every line , cept that last piss take ;...I drank in every line , cept that last piss take ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17957913294364310380noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-36672521515441174082013-11-19T23:55:12.683-05:002013-11-19T23:55:12.683-05:00surprising twist at the end but a fantastic one..w...surprising twist at the end but a fantastic one..what do you say to yourself when the ego is stripped..liked your poemDorianna (paintswithwords)http://paintswithwords.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-88384180389180352932013-11-19T19:31:10.133-05:002013-11-19T19:31:10.133-05:00That ending is a fabuloust twist. (No pun intended...That ending is a fabuloust twist. (No pun intended). The relection in the toilet below is stark contrast to the page being a mirror in your poem. That's the subtle stuff I find brilliant about your work. Bravo sir, bravo!emmett wheatfallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07466994239329611740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-70822772189341347922013-11-19T17:36:54.543-05:002013-11-19T17:36:54.543-05:00That ending definitely makes ME question. Wheew!...That ending definitely makes ME question. Wheew!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-671350432351973812013-11-19T16:32:24.990-05:002013-11-19T16:32:24.990-05:00what do you say to yourself when every sign of
ag...what do you say to yourself when every sign of <br />aging, fear, doubt and anxiety are in full view <br />farthest from vanity at a pisser's angle?...great words, powerful and thought provoking.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-35161684112722103822013-11-19T16:21:30.037-05:002013-11-19T16:21:30.037-05:00Loved it from the beginning into that final twist....Loved it from the beginning into that final twist. Mad me think.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-84213288962384919342013-11-19T16:13:52.042-05:002013-11-19T16:13:52.042-05:00parts of this made me think of martin luther and w...parts of this made me think of martin luther and what he saw in that castle when translating scriptureClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-13555066312933524022013-11-19T15:42:29.015-05:002013-11-19T15:42:29.015-05:00SLAM! That ending giving us a real lesson in POV.SLAM! That ending giving us a real lesson in POV.Joseph Heschhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13217169295029029233noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-39811749944903712892013-11-18T21:16:24.612-05:002013-11-18T21:16:24.612-05:00nice beat through the first bit....nice beat through the first bit....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7977911864791867654.post-41237550744624864112013-11-18T21:16:11.719-05:002013-11-18T21:16:11.719-05:00perspective...a pissers point of view....hopefully...perspective...a pissers point of view....hopefully we are not pissing on ourselves, but...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com