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feeling a bit bleek this week anthony, intriguing imagery...have we tied gods hands and made them little more than a symbol?and love the outfits in the header this week...
Agree with Brian - bleak words and they are hard times.I'm sensing it's one of those changing times for everyone. You said it well here, my friend.
Sharp and clear sighted, wonderful imagery. I wrote about Athena :).
heavy hands....deep, painful...brilliant imagery
.. a barren land.. and hands unworking.. sombre stuff. Fine write, Anthony.
For such a short write, the power of this piece is immense! God-like ;) Very heavy handed write that has caused this reader to ponder. Thank Zeus for dVerse!
I definitely feel this one, Anthony. "My fingers; dipped in wet cement They harden" - I know this too well. Thanks for sharing with us.
great write love the picture too ....thank you x
sewn to a barren land....you manage to paint a landscape of pain and doubts with a few words anthony
"Totem poles sewn to a barren land" grim and sad images here...and i like that header picture ~
You capture bleakness with rich imagery... Cool!
Awesomely bleak imagery. You are able to express so very much with so few words.
What a fantastic image!
bleak but true, and in truth, there is always beauty.
I don't know about bleak. I see a statue made by people to a god that does or doesn't exist in hopes of turning their barren land fertile.For better or worse, that's what I call Faith.Cool, tight image, AD.
To me this speaks of a permanence, survival through the ages, even after the believers have gone. I don't see that as bleak. And there is certainly nothing bleak about these wonderful photographs you use. But, then, you already know how much I like them.
So intriguing. I find the use of sewn so unexpected. Wonderful photo too.
This is very good and yes Zeus speaks of survival through out the ages and how strong one must be to do this. Well donehttp://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/27/addiction-to-solitaire/#comment-1201
Oh, wow, so much deep imagery in such few lines. I love this!
in the heaviness of your words, I see a wisp of hope..magnificent words and picture
I get more of a "The gods have fled" vibe, the loneliness of the empty sky, the lack of Powers in a diminishing day. Fine write. - Brendan
Symbols of power with none?
Very evocative of that helpless immobility that often strikes when one is overwhelmed by circumstance and strong emotion--also need to mention I love the costume work in your headers--just amazing stuff and mean to say so every time I visit.
Wow - deity concentrated in form.. what I love is the fact that you haven't mentioned "statue" - and yet, have made a perfect visual of it with your words. ~Aida
I just came over from Anna Montgomery's piece on Athena, and I find it very striking how this is also titled/centered around a myth but has a very different feel. In four little lines you manage to convey so much... so much of power and of hardness. A very strong write. Can you tell us more about the picture above it?
Wow! My first visit to your site, Anthony : ) Amazing! You say a lot in so few words in this and have used the prompt beautifully. The last line really ties it up, but the entire piece is wonderful. Great photo : )) Can't wait to return...-Eva
A gorgeous piece of poetry my friend. A gem. Short and concise--I love it. Especially how each line flows into the other. This one is an amazing write in my mind, Anthony. Your talent is all up in this piece.
an evocative, stunning poem.
Really like the imagery in this.Great poem.
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