The color doe stand out beautifully in this photo, and you bring out the images amazing abstract nature. Very cool how chartreuse acts as gravity. Agree with Brian, a different type of write for you today. Excellent challenge response, A
Loved this Anthony. Definitely out of your usual tone and frame and wonderfully done. I went to a similar place when I saw it. I heard a tune though and still haven't found the words.
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Love this... defying gravity Against the pull of Chartreuse... great line.
beautiful write ... I love anything associated with 'defying' ...
excellent friend
Wonderful love it...Chromatic atmosphere..perfect for this photo...bkm
nice tight slice of heaven.head in the clouds...many meanings.nice!
Thank you guys so much!
against the pull of the chartreuse...ha...nice. stylistically different for you...my one shoot will be up in a bit...
The color doe stand out beautifully in this photo, and you bring out the images amazing abstract nature. Very cool how chartreuse acts as gravity. Agree with Brian, a different type of write for you today. Excellent challenge response, A
Succinct, witty and a good response to the prompt. What more could anyone want?
Tight, very tight and though provoking. "Head in the cloulds" ...wish I had seen that!
I like your take on the prompt - simple but effective - I found this one really tough!
Loved this Anthony. Definitely out of your usual tone and frame and wonderfully done. I went to a similar place when I saw it. I heard a tune though and still haven't found the words.
A deceptively simple write-- evocative and thought-provoking. xxj
Great job you !! Well done !
JL&B
Striking word choices, blunt/short verse lines: effective piece.
and that chartreuse can be quite persuasive :)
stunning words.
Enjoyed this, awesome talent.
Invite you to join poets rally week 42 by sharing a free verse today.
Appreciate your input.
Hope to see you in!
Have A Blessed Easter!
xxx
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