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Lovely tanka, Anthony.It carries well throughout the top and bottom poems with a good pivot line to bridge.Lady Nyo. A very satisfying tanka.
Oh very lovely...I love the vision in "Deep exhale of ivory"....gorgeous!!...bkm
I love the feel/look of snow kissed trees. Woke up to them this morning and smiled. Your tanka captures the feel just as beautifully as the scene outside my window
Lovely take. love the 'deep exhale of ivory' beautiful words.
nicely played...i am hoping though that february continues to bring me the warmth it has the last couple days...the naked trees is a good chilling hook...
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