Oh, Anthony! A gem! Man, you wrote a one stanza poem that is so potent, I just want to scream. You take the metaphor of praying and link it to its antithesis--a gun. Powerful Anthony, powerful. You moved me with this one young poet.
Oh, Anthony! A gem! Man, you wrote a one stanza poem that is so potent, I just want to scream. You take the metaphor of praying and link it to its antithesis--a gun. Powerful Anthony, powerful. You moved me with this one young poet.
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Brilliant piece, Anthony! As brief as a gun shot and just as powerful!
dang bro.....praying with our pistols pointed...def is far from wisdom...
ugh..the fading of wisdom indeed...guns don't solve problems..ugh..
Yes! so true . Short and brilliant.
you've said so much in your few well chosen words Anthony. Thank you for this.
Well and tightly written. >KB
Anythony, you have said so much in your few words. I'm in awe!! Brilliant.
indeed - a deeper truth than most people would want to face
powerful poem
tight and brilliant. many layers in a small space.
Oh, Anthony! A gem! Man, you wrote a one stanza poem that is so potent, I just want to scream. You take the metaphor of praying and link it to its antithesis--a gun. Powerful Anthony, powerful. You moved me with this one young poet.
Oh, Anthony! A gem! Man, you wrote a one stanza poem that is so potent, I just want to scream. You take the metaphor of praying and link it to its antithesis--a gun. Powerful Anthony, powerful. You moved me with this one young poet.
fading of wisdom... there is indeed a lot of wisdom packed in just a few words...well done
Hard hitting wisdom.
nice. Short and powerful.
Short and sharp as a pistol shot ~
Good to see you Anthony ~
ah! the end of wisdom is the end of humanities own truth.
Perfect!
Truthful and thought evoking
So much said in just 4 lines of poetry! Absolutely amazing! :-)
Truly. Wow. A true BANG piece.
bringing me to my knees
brother ant, my knees -
increase the peace!
so much with so little... profound.
echoing- brilliant ~ M
Yes we do!
Brilliant! Even with so few words, you've said quite a lot here.
Said with a bang!
Yes! prayer of violence! is not much of a prayer as opposed to God is Love...:)
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