Beauty lies within the controversy of
undiscovered love
Echo – Love
Flawed, so they separate for the art
Echo – Apart
Bound by darkness for the sake of
metaphor
Echo – Ignore
Tortured poets live and die by their
own hand
Echo – Withstand
Drowning in hopes of infinite light
Echo – Spite
Gravity defied, only to add more weight
to the heart
Echo – Art
Echo – Art
for dverse
16 comments:
Oh I love how the art is the resolution to the poet's struggle.. exactly how we gain the wisdom from the echo.
Really like how you worked with the Echo, Anthony. Your poem does say something about the creative process. So much is borne for the art of Poetry!
Wow! I really like where you went with your poem, Anthony. I think my favorite line is the opening one though. True art does come from love.
Per usual, unlike you, who rocked the prompt with a few well chosen lines, & bitchin' echoes, I, of course, echoed my ass off relative to my latest rant on foolitics.
Tortured poets live and die by their own hand
Echo – Withstand
That's just one of the many I could have picked as my favourite. A thoughtful and punchy meditation on art and the artist. You are all so amazingly good at this poetic form - it's quite intimidating (I haven't had inspiration for one yet).
Such a powerful verse. Loved your take on the prompt :)
amazing and very powerful.
Art is beauty(love) and beauty art...so wonderfully expressed...
Finely crafted.
Not just echoing it, but giving the last words a sharp edge specially hand/withstand and light/spite ~ The title is wicked too ~
The line that really struck me was the one about the poets. I suppose it all has to do with intensity of feelings. I really enjoyed this Anthony.
Sterling art, Anthony! Your first line defines beauty...and your powerful title, echo: suicidal !
True Poet heArt of Spirit
Written
Resolve to forge ahead
Bled
Poem of Now grow
SoUl..:)
Beautiful... as it echoes a poets torment and resolute.
This is super kick-ass. Love it to the max.
Perfect: "Flawed, so they separate for the art"
this so brought sylvia plath to my mind - and maybe everyone of us a bit
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