I laid with you as an eloquent nude
Accepting every hour
As another eccentricity
In a bath of your lemon curd
A climax of euphoria
From your full lips
Down to the fat of your hips
Counting thy blessings as
One torn rib of man
Creating a cannibal's cave in the sheets
While two tongues wilt like dying roses
In an eclipse of atmosphere reminiscent of 3 a.m.
You light a cigarette while I play the flute
For this starless night as the face
Of a hungry child graces the television set
Actors paid to enslave beggars
For a petty flashing light
Encircled in smoke rings
I still breathe fullness as pure
As my once virgin tongue
Now weaving between your teeth
As you slowly capture me in your jaw
For pleasures unknown
Plotting revenge like a sadistic fiend
I am a cross at the scene of a tragedy
Overshadowed by tall blades of grass
A venomous hold sharp like
The structure of your face
Cheek bones give me lacerations
Along my spine with intentions to please
Gagged and bound
I have your disease
©2011 Anthony Desmond Scott. All Rights Reserved.
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25 comments:
One torn rib of man
Creating a cannibal's cave in the sheets
While two tongues wilt like dying roses
and
i ama cross at the scene of a tragedy
great lines anthony and hot verse...nice an sensual...might not be a bad disease...
this is one disease worth having...sensual write my friend :)
Another excellent piece. This line really resonated with me, gave me shivers: "I am a cross at the scene of a tragedy / Overshadowed by tall blades of grass". Thanks for the thought-provoking write.
whew. so many great lines to love, I can't pick a favorite, but really love the whole piece.
My favorite? I laid with you as an eloquent nude. Thanks for posting and sharing.
Intense and beautiful. Your lines cascade with assurance one to the other delivering a riveting portrait of lovers loving and the painful ache there....xxxj
Gorgeously rendered and full of ideas, thank you for giving us such incredible work each week.
This is so rich with imagery. Wow!
I know you are using sensual imagery; however, I read this as political and perhaps religious protest. Am I wrong? The disease is pulling us all into darkness (and probably not filled with delicious lemon curd). Thought provoking, for sure. Well done, Anthony!
That disease tells me as if aids... but at the same time, a contagious beautiful love thing... don't know...
Very sensual, what an affliction! some lovely writing here..very much enjoyed this poem, especially:
'Counting thy blessings as
One torn rib of man
Creating a cannibal's cave in the sheets'
oh goodness anthony...this is dripping with raw sensuality...sent shivers down my spine...pure pleasure...
Darkly sensuous & very intense. "Gagged and bound I have your disease" ~ Maybe not a bad thing...
Powerful images here, excellent read, thanks
Lots of interesting images you paint, especially
"I laid with you as an eloquent nude."
"I still breathe fullness as pure" This line strikes me as well.
Perhaps, I read it wrong, but I thought it was kind of sad, like one wanting what wasn't good. Either way, you know how to rock a poem, Anthony. Excellent as always :)
Well hello! This was a steamy one Anthony mixed with a little regret perhaps?
Aspects of brillance litter this poem. Not as trash, but momentary insights into a great poets mind. You are getting better, more refined, diverse, and original Anthony.
Brilliant piece my friend. Love the depth hidden within the images, weaving darkness into the blanket of sensuality.
such an excellent write all your lines are brilliant and it is hard to choose one that stands out more than the rest so well done
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/18/farewell-my-three-legged-friend/
very sensual write ....thanks for sharing x
Very sensual and hot words. Love it.
Melanie
hot, powerful attitude.
well done piece.
Loved this poem ... very sensual :)
I see it as a harsh, admonishing social commentary with poetic license liberally employed.
I've read it several times without making much more of it, but if it is what you intended, it is enough.
Cheers!
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