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Chilling tale that asks many questions Anthony.Great one shot.
Oh, great write Anthony...and I love your belief to inspire....beautiful...bkm
poignant the structure carries these words well.
A powerful poem Anthony....thought provoking, and beautifully written! :-)
Fascinating--leaves many questions to ponder.Teresa
Few words that speak volumes. A powerful write.Anita.
Wow that's a chilling imagewell doneThanks for the One ShotMoon Smiles
What a nice flow!
Excellent Anthony; capture the chilling quality at its essence ..tragedy implied in every syllable.
Great flow... I found your use of language to be quite unique and what a great line - “On linoleum boxed-tops-heart-stops” very poignant! also liked the contrast between "sulfur drops" and "pearly white floors"
As the comments say...very chilling...and very well written.Thanks for taking part in One Shot...all the best Pete
So little, but so much from it. Fearfully well-executed.
Very dense language. I like the hard syllables that pile up on top of each other.
Fine poetic arrangement of rhythm and images. Very well done.
You've painted quite a picture with these few words, Anthony. Nice shot!
Pointed, political, potent.
hi anthony~~~i like the wordpearly
I've read some short poems,today.(Sorry for coming late,work is killing all my time.)It amazes me how all of you can express so much in just a few words.Need to learn that.I agree,CHILLING!And very POWERFUL!
So much said in a few words. Very good.
Dear AnthonyAhh!!! Perfect imagery...ॐ नमः शिवायOm Namah ShivayaTwitter: @VerseEveryDayBlog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
chilling. the sounds in this one march on, don't let up, like the tragedy they suggest
Anthony, intense sensory. Thanks for sharing.
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